Statement of Intent: January feedback and LR

Mark: 10

Grade: A*

Comments on Statement of Intent:

·         This is a stunning Statement of Intent that easily exceeds A Level standards. The level of thought behind the concept is truly outstanding and worthy of the very top of level 5.

·         The only possible issue could be word count – I’ll get a second opinion from Mr Bush. If you did need to cut it, I’d say a couple of the media language bullet points could go or perhaps some of the audience and industry section. One to perhaps look at a final time but this is just brilliant.

LEARNER'S RESPONSE

STATEMENT OF INTENT