Mark: 10
Grade: A*
Comments on Statement of Intent:
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This is a stunning Statement of Intent that
easily exceeds A Level standards. The level of thought behind the concept is
truly outstanding and worthy of the very top of level 5.
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The only possible issue could be word count –
I’ll get a second opinion from Mr Bush. If you did need to cut it, I’d say a
couple of the media language bullet points could go or perhaps some of the
audience and industry section. One to perhaps look at a final time but this is
just brilliant.
LEARNER'S RESPONSE
STATEMENT OF INTENT
